Lois - What a chillingly powerful piece. These lines are stunning: "He had traced his fingers down the spine of her ambition, pressed against the edges of her hunger, whispered in her ear that she was almost ready. But not yet."
Rebecca—your words hit just right. ‘Chillingly powerful’ is exactly the kind of tension I love to play with. There’s something about holding a woman right at the edge of her hunger, making her feel that unbearable almost—but not yet.
Thrilled you’re looking forward to more—because there’s so much more to come. 😘
Lois - What a chillingly powerful piece. These lines are stunning: "He had traced his fingers down the spine of her ambition, pressed against the edges of her hunger, whispered in her ear that she was almost ready. But not yet."
Looking forward to reading more!
Rebecca—your words hit just right. ‘Chillingly powerful’ is exactly the kind of tension I love to play with. There’s something about holding a woman right at the edge of her hunger, making her feel that unbearable almost—but not yet.
Thrilled you’re looking forward to more—because there’s so much more to come. 😘